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LOG IN Forgot Login? Register General Discussion • Trading Post • Non-Film Score Discussion  Profile • Preferences • Community Rules • Help/Contact • Search Board Search Terms:  Search Within:  topics posts since 2019 2018 posts 2017 posts 2016 posts 2015 posts 2014 posts 2013 posts 2012 posts 2011 posts 2010 posts 2009 posts 2008 posts 2007 posts 2006 posts 2005 posts 2004 posts 2003 posts 2002 posts 2001 posts 2000 posts users  search tips  You must log in or register to post.   Go to page:  1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35      Non-Film Score Discussion: FSM POETS: Write Here    FIRST   PRIOR   26 27 28 29 30    NEXT   LAST   Last Post   Posted:   Feb 23, 2019 - 10:31 PM     By:   joan hue   (Member) Jackfu, loved your creepos poem. I should have chimed in earlier. THE GAME I grow weary of the game you and I play every week. We arrive at school overly groomed, exchanging wide crescent moon smiles. It seems no matter how awkward the shuffle, we deal our best to each other. But in evenings, I ponder a mute phone and empty weekends. I’m too glacial to first cut the deck because I still remember at twelve leading Johnathon my most vulnerable card, too late discovering as he trumped it with a club, his void in hearts.    Posted:   Feb 24, 2019 - 9:16 AM     By:   DOGBELLE   (Member) THE VALLEY OF THE ECHO RETORT it was one of those cold damp days. the cold gets into your bones. I walked up to the top of the hill. Looking over the ridge I shouted. I'am. (echo)what are you? I'am, I replied. (echo) So!. I'am, I replied. (echo) who cares? I'am, I replied (echo) your voice sours the air. I'am, I replied (echo) you do not know? I'am, I replied. I'am, I replied. I'am, I replied. I walked down the hill. happy in knowing what I'am. (sorry about this one. way too many late night movies)    Posted:   Feb 24, 2019 - 9:59 AM     By:   joan hue   (Member) Don't you say "sorry", Doggie. I always appreciate your poems. They have doggie HEART!    Posted:   Feb 24, 2019 - 10:10 AM     By:   Tall Guy   (Member) Don't you say "sorry", Doggie. I always appreciate your poems. They have doggie HEART! Yep (yap?) - great recent work by all concerned!    Posted:   Mar 1, 2019 - 5:51 AM     By:   Tall Guy   (Member) Charlton Heston Made many a western And nobody could stifle His love for a rifle...    Posted:   Mar 1, 2019 - 6:46 AM     By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member) Charlton Heston Made many a western And nobody could stifle His love for a trifle... Made it better for you....    Posted:   Mar 1, 2019 - 8:37 AM     By:   joan hue   (Member) Nice job as always, TG.    Posted:   Mar 1, 2019 - 10:40 AM     By:   Tall Guy   (Member) Charlton Heston Made many a western And nobody could stifle His love for a trifle... Made it better for you.... Can’t argue with that, Bill - his fondness for a fondant was legendary. And thanks Joan.    Posted:   Mar 1, 2019 - 11:13 AM     By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member) He always insisted the sponge was soaked overnight, to make it properly moist. I read that once in the book Its a Spongehouse: How to make the best trifles - by Chuck Heston.    Posted:   Mar 1, 2019 - 11:24 AM     By:   dtw   (Member) Oh well if we're clerihewing, Jack Palance Forsook underpants; Except in City Slickers For which he wore frilly knickers.    Posted:   Mar 2, 2019 - 9:45 AM     By:   joan hue   (Member) dtw, like your poem and your verb "clerihewing." Let's add it to the dictionary!    Posted:   Mar 3, 2019 - 11:15 PM     By:   DOGBELLE   (Member) LOOKING IN THE DARK nothing at first glance. my eyes adjust. monitoring the sounds in the air. moonlight reflexes off the lake. cold wind takes my soul. the trees reach out. my reflexes slow. the mind plays my life in review. oh! my I just got 4 stars. well at least the National Enquirer liked my life. out of the dark, that sound came. repeating over and over. never stopping. arf,arf,arf,arf. Ok, ok, I heard my voice project. Fred the dog, knows me too well. arf,arf,arf. Good dog.good dog.    Posted:   Mar 20, 2019 - 5:59 PM     By:   joan hue   (Member) THE WRITING TEACHER “Life’s a rough draft,” said my writing teacher. O.K. I get it. I ain’t no dummy. The final publishable copy means…Umh? All right. I’ll keep on revising. Often. Lots. I’ll even join an edit group, listen to their advice. Want me to put some pausing commas in my mouth? Add elaborative details to my brain? Destroy my passive voice with peers? Capitalize my Heart? Spell Conscience correctly? Done. I’ll even drop fun fragments, committing to full sentences. Afterall, don’t think the Big One in the sky is going to harass me as easily as the teacher in front of me. Got it all figured out. God gives final essays only one of two grades. Can’t figure a way to coerce Him/Her into grading on a curve or just letting me pass with a D-.    Posted:   Mar 23, 2019 - 9:09 PM     By:   DOGBELLE   (Member) dear Joan why do want to go through all that trouble of , "" ? ect ect when you can more fun by just using run-on sentences just like that little bunny they just keep going and going I gave up on English writing when the teacher tried to explain a dangling participle I was left dangling in my brain on what did this mean if your lazy person like me it will exclude me from the publication field and most high paying jobs this will leave time to go to that free college down the street also you will solve any worry you have about your grade so just get on the bandwagon and do a 5k run on for some charity I hope you can see your way to my way of thinking How to Identify Sentence Structure Errors ---- ha ha ha ha ha ha    Posted:   Mar 23, 2019 - 10:13 PM     By:   joan hue   (Member) I see your way of thinking, Doggie. I'm fine if you run those sentences on and on and on and on and on and on...……………………………………...    Posted:   Mar 24, 2019 - 12:11 AM     By:   Tall Guy   (Member) I see your way of thinking, Doggie. I'm fine if you fun those sentences on and on and on and on and on and on...……………………………………... I’ve fallen a little behind on this thread - two great pieces of work from Joan and the Dog. We should self publish!    Posted:   Mar 24, 2019 - 8:39 AM     By:   dtw   (Member) There's a thread on the other side about bashing CDs with a hammer. What I'd like to do instead is to bash that incessant spammer bot.    Posted:   Mar 24, 2019 - 9:15 AM     By:   joan hue   (Member) Thanks, TG. Doggie and I appreciate you. dtw, "What and bot." Nifty. I'll bet there are limericks out there waiting to take on the subject of spammer bots.    Posted:   Mar 24, 2019 - 9:24 AM     By:   dtw   (Member) Thanks, TG. Doggie and I appreciate you. dtw, "What and bot." Nifty. Channelling Ogden Nash, as so often... ;-)    Posted:   Apr 3, 2019 - 1:09 AM     By:   DOGBELLE   (Member) my dog Fred has something to say. arf,arf,arf! grrrrr,grrrrrr! me- no, no you don't give me that bull. arf! arf! arf! me- you just wait for my movie ends. ARF! ARF! ARRRRRRRRRF! ME- hey it's El Cid, you know with Sophia Loren and Sophia Loren.Plus some guy on a horse. grrrrrrr! GRRRRRRR! ARF,ARF ARF. WIFE - HEY! you Mr. hot stuff, the dam dog just pissed on the rug. ME -Grrrrrrrr! where are you, Fred? from under the bed - arf,arf,arfy,arf,arf.     Non-Film Score Discussion: FSM POETS: Write Here    << < 26 27 28 29 30  > >>  Go to page:  1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35   First Post    General Discussion • Trading Post • Non-Film Score Discussion  Profile • Preferences • Community Rules • Help/Contact • Search Board You must log in or register to post.   Go to page:  1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35

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