For the melody to be correct (that is, as Rosenthal wrote it), the long C# at around 0:56 should be E. And the F-E-D-E figure at around 1:02 should be F-E-D#-E. Ditto for when the line repeats. Just nit-picking, in case these discrepancies were unintended.
Thanks for the notes ... the discrepancies were unintended, but I think I will leave them as is. The first note, I guess I am not a fan of octave jumps with the melody.
As for the second, it just seems to work better with the harmony than the sharp. My preference though.
