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 Posted:   Sep 11, 2018 - 10:52 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Have you tried The Patch, Jackfu? Cute poem.

 
 Posted:   Sep 12, 2018 - 4:54 AM   
 By:   jackfu   (Member)

Have you tried The Patch, Jackfu? Cute poem.

big grin

Thanks Joan!

 
 
 Posted:   Sep 12, 2018 - 10:21 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)


This poem was published in a rather obscure Northwest magazine, probably because it takes place in the Northwest. Obviously, my father is often used in my poems as he was a grand man and a personal inspiration.


LIFESAVERS

Only five, kid daughter
replacing an absent son, I
fished Lake Rimrock with Dad.
Those too infrequent tugs
on my line frenzied my blood,
small hands wrestling
line and pole, scabbed
knees vising a whirring reel.
My incoherent shrieks dove
through the lake’s surface
and even then, I felt an
imperative to win that
life from its water.
My body, pretzeled around the
fishing pole, was always
the victor thanks to
a calm father who balanced
the rocking boat and
scooped the saving net.
Nothing ever got away,
then.

Too young to tolerate
time between tugs,
five minutes being hours
to one so small,
Dad would hand me
fruit flavored lifesavers,
miniature versions of the
round float rings
harbored in our bow.

Later I grew away from
candy, fish and waters and
have stayed this distance too long.
Now I sense at some
capillary core, a tug
towards lakes and poles.
With only the question mark
curve of a small hook,
could I gain again
some awkward command
of even scaled primitive life?
I ask since deliberate adult
choreography controls so
little except self- netted vagaries.
And if it’s too late
to maneuver a boat from shore,
I can still buy a pack of
Lifesavers, savor round,
sweet circles that float
balanced on my tongue,
rescuing me right
now.

 
 
 Posted:   Sep 13, 2018 - 5:07 AM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

That's lovely, Joan. Any more that you've been hiding from us? Or do you think we can only take so much at a time! big grin

 
 
 Posted:   Sep 13, 2018 - 2:20 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Thanks, TG. I may have a few more. I'm going to be coming and going for the next month or so, but I'll post something when I'm here.

 
 
 Posted:   Sep 13, 2018 - 10:24 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Look what Mr. Dogbelle did with my poem. Cool.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w6ZoUQ2l9XU

 
 
 Posted:   Oct 10, 2018 - 10:20 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

So I leave for three weeks
and no poets did speak.

Hope you all monitored Bill
to keep him from being a pill.

Get back here and do write
because yes I do often bite.

If I wasn't sorely missed,
I will be royally pissed.

smile

 
 Posted:   Oct 10, 2018 - 10:32 PM   
 By:   'Lenny Bruce' Marshall   (Member)

First, the school shootings
Then, superstorms
When will our leaders realise
This is now the new norm?

 
 Posted:   Oct 10, 2018 - 11:40 PM   
 By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member)

Twas the night at the forum,
when all through the house
Not a creature was stirring,
Not even a Joan

I thought it had been quiet. Is she on holiday?
God TG, you dont think...you dont think shes over here do you? She always threatened it and ive never slept soundly since wink

 
 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 12:10 AM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

Twas the night at the forum,
when all through the house
Not a creature was stirring,
Not even a Joan

I thought it had been quiet. Is she on holiday?
God TG, you dont think...you dont think shes over here do you? She always threatened it and ive never slept soundly since wink



Well the weather’s been very odd over the last couple of weeks. I put it down to atmospherics...but you never know. Cats and dogs have been seen talking and driving cars, and owls using iPhones.

 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 12:37 AM   
 By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member)

Yes i saw badgers packing suitcases and getting a taxi and all the squirrels in the road dug up their nuts and hopped on the bus. Plus that day-turned-to-night Barabbas-like eclipse yesterday, i thought something might be up.
Now you have confirmed it.

 
 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 7:56 AM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Nice one, Bruce.



Aww, come on TG and Bill. You know you missed my wise counsel. smile

I did land in Heathrow two times but then left for Lisbon and came home from Budapest, so the weather can't be my fault.

 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 10:15 AM   
 By:   jackfu   (Member)

"The Seidel Shuffle" (To the tune of "The Super Bowl Shuffle" - Owens, Barry, Daniels, Meyer)


The Seidel Shuffle

There's a big storm comin' right at you,
I hope you know just what to do.
It looks bad, a-comin’ on hard,
Blowin’ and rainin’, so sound the alarm!
It’s serious business, I ain’t makin’ fun;
But there’s one thing I’d like to see done.
I don’t want the storm to cause any trouble.
I just wanna see the “Mike Seidel Shuffle”!


 
 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 1:37 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Welcome back, Poet Jackfu.

 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 1:53 PM   
 By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member)


I did land in Heathrow two times but then left for Lisbon and came home from Budapest....


There's the answer TG - she WAS here! No wonder all the animals and insects scuttled for cover and we had fire n brimstone of biblical proportions !


I heard on the news Budapest had an earthquake and lisbon had locusts and famine. wink

 
 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 2:48 PM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

And she brought a plague of ladybirds...

 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 2:57 PM   
 By:   DOGBELLE   (Member)

And she brought a plague of ladybirds...

are you saying that "she" is the root of all(??????).

Noooooo, that's not true. But I just heard that Washington state is sinking into the Pacific ocean.

 
 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 3:22 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Oh boys, don't mess with Mother Nature. It is dangerous.

 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 3:25 PM   
 By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member)

And she brought a plague of ladybirds...

I noticed that. And false widow spiders!!

 
 Posted:   Oct 11, 2018 - 6:03 PM   
 By:   edwzoomom   (Member)

Welcome back joan. You are sorely needed to keep the Brat, I mean Brit boys in line.

 
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